Jason and Friends comic series [Need feedback]

Started by Brittany-shadowwolf, April 08, 2011, 05:27:53 PM

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Brittany-shadowwolf


Heres the pilot comic. What do you guys think? Should I color it or leave it as is?
Should I continue?

~~shadowwolf

Kitten

That Rocks!!!


I like! It might look better with colour but, it also might look better in greyscale
Kitten, Alex
"Never attribute to malice that which is adequately explained by stupidity" ~Robert A. Heinlein & Robert J. Hanlon

Renwaldo

XD I think it's very lulzy. Do you have plans to continue it online?

It's up to you whether or not to colour it, I think it looks fine as is. If you decide to do more colouring all of it is going to feel tedious.

Brittany-shadowwolf

Thanks guys~

Yes, I do plan to continue it online. I don't have a site, so I post it up on my Deviantart, Furaffinity and now my Tumblr 'JasonLand'. I may post them here under the art section time to time. I'm hoping to develop the char's and the general art. Maybe have it digitally drawn one day and some flash animated shorts.


~~shadowwolf

Renwaldo

Sounds good.  ;D

I'll keep my eyes peeled for more.

PurpleVeggie

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D: This HAS to continue! I made you a Jason button.... but it got screwed up and it's not drawn very well.
Quack :V

Neox

I laughed out loud. =P  It's pretty funny.

I think it would look great with some monochromatic shading.  Maybe all a light red/light blue but lightly shaded at that.
NaEthOliX.

Call me Naetholix, Neox, Neo or Steve, I respond to all of them. =)

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Raiden Wolf

lol This is great! XD I had a good laugh from it. Awesome job on the comic page Brittany!  :D

Unition


spuug

Quote from: Brittany-shadowwolf on April 08, 2011, 05:27:53 PM
Heres the pilot comic. What do you guys think? Should I color it or leave it as is?
Should I continue?
~~shadowwolf

It already has a bit of colour.  Most of the comic is in the text.  Colouring it won't add anything to the joke, so just leave it as is.   There's not much to continue here, unless you come up with another scenerio, in which case, keep going.


- Spuug -

PurpleVeggie

Quote from: spuug on April 09, 2011, 04:52:47 PM
There's not much to continue here, unless you come up with another scenerio, in which case, keep going.


Purple doesn't get to wake up :c
Quack :V

Zetta

Needs moar tophat.

lucky for you my masterwork photoshoop skills are here to help.


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He also reminds me of a hyena.

i also want to see moar of this.

Nayr

Awesome! You should definitely think of continuing this! I think it looks fine as it is, but give colouring a shot. Might just be worth it.  :birdy:

MurphyErasmus

Pack sitting at the table at RR.
Sevi dozing, Purple cowering, us talking about BD.
Purple goes "IT'S MY BIRTHDAY"
Pack goes "YAAAY".

Comic. Bam.

Brittany-shadowwolf

Quote from: MurphyErasmus on April 12, 2011, 12:34:05 AM
Pack sitting at the table at RR.
Sevi dozing, Purple cowering, us talking about BD.
Purple goes "IT'S MY BIRTHDAY"
Pack goes "YAAAY".

Comic. Bam.

GOD FINE. IT HAS TO BE DONE. REAL LIFE STORIES ARE A MUST.

~~Shadowwolf