original lyrics/poetry

Started by thatkittyguy, June 07, 2010, 11:09:49 AM

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thatkittyguy

i think people should post lyrics they have written, and DONT plagerize. ill start.


I am jack

I am jacks numbing bordom
drilling through his mind
i am jacks wishful thinking
looking for any good it can find
i am jacks raging anger
just below the surface
i am jacks truthful eyes
showing the true emotions
i am jacks vulger tongue
bringing his thoughts to be
i am jacks middle finger
raised for the world to see
i am jacks unquenched thirst
dry as a deserts sand
i am jacks flying spit
staying where ever i land
i am jacks blackend lungs
now, all but ruin
i am jacks cancerous tumer
macking his end come soon
I am Jack
and all of this is me
if i was born a day earlier not much would be different other than i would have said this yesterday.

Ember

Congrats, you ripped off Fight Club.

Ember

Narrator: I am Jack's smirking revenge.
Narrator: I am Jack's cold sweat.
Narrator: I am Jack's raging bile duct.
Narrator: [reading] I am Jack's colon.
Tyler Durden: I get cancer, I kill Jack.
Narrator: I am Jack's complete lack of surprise.
Narrator: I am Jack's wasted life.
Narrator: I am Jack's inflamed sense of rejection.
Narrator: I am Jack's broken heart.

thatkittyguy

Forever
verse1
looking at the ceiling for what i need to hear
nothing i think will come near
watchin the news for somethin new
just cant get my mind off of you
verse2
cant get the words to flow
wanna tel ya something you dont know
the words i wanna use are so hard to find
cuase i dont know whats in your mind
chorus
baby, ya know the songs for you
finally, thought of somethin new
the cieling,told me what i need to hear
let me, whisper it into your ear
dont leave, me behind
or else, i'll die in my mind
if we, can be together
my love, will last forever
verse3
couple years later tryin to right somethin new
its a little gift just for you
i wrote you a song to love me forever
hear it is i hope you remember
chorus repeat
brigde
tkain you out for a fancy dinner
hopin this ring will make me a winner
down on my knee to propose
when i did this you just froze
if you say no i'll be a mess
but inside i know you'll say yes
chorus repeat
outro
looked through a box till i finally found
one little thing that made you proud
i wrote you a song to love my forever
here it is i hope you remember

(a little cliche)
if i was born a day earlier not much would be different other than i would have said this yesterday.

FiFi

                                           My Dream
                                                  by FiFi Darkfury
I woke up to the silent darkness of the night ,
sadness was strolling a round in my head so i turned on the light,
Iwas crying tears strolling down my face ,
It was you i was thinking of that i could not erase,
There was this dream i had that made me very sad,
It was a wonderfull sunny day and there were no clouds in the way,
The sun had its warmth to lend ,
I could see grean clovers and flowers on end!
I was a beautifull site i wanted to share !
Then i heard your vioce though out the air 1
You were caallin my name ,
Thought i was going insane  ,
Though i was the only one there just me!
Then i saw you standing by a big old oak tree,
Iwas walking towards you and then my eyes froze,
You were holding a beautifull single red rose!
You  recited the peom you wrote for me..
then held me in your arms and kissed me gentaly.
Thoughs kisses sent shivers down my spine !
It felt so right so very fine,
Then i whisper so softly in you ear *Ilove you*
It gave me a warm glowing feeling cause i knew it was true ,
We were so good together and thought we'd last for ever and ever ..
Then our beautifull day clouded over ,
It turned to deep darkness i could see no flowers or clover!
then omg! you were gone like thundar and lighting!
OHGOSH! it was so very frighting!
The beautifull single red rose disapperd in to thin air..
I fell to the floor in sad dispair,
I was crying , tear strolling down my face,
It was you i was thinking of , that i couldnt replace,
I knew something went wrong,
Cause all i ever wished for and wanted is now gone,
So i woke up to the silent darkness of the night,
Sadness was rolling a round in my head so i turned on the lights.
~CuDdLe FuRrIeS UnItE!~

Oly

"Someone finally thought of the children, Helen"

Violent child, angry child
Lustful child, prideful child
Vicious child, mocking child
crying child, slothful child

come to play

all the children writing love poems
to our ignorance and degradation,
intolerance and senseless hating
potential wasted, they expire

minds deflate

lonely child, greedy child
senseless child, wasteful child
voiceless child, eyeless child
useless child, mindful child
moldable child, ,mindless child,
controllable child, expendable child

done away

every child is a violent child
we make every violent child
i grew up a violent child
i will die a violent child

---


I cut my hand off
without a stutter.
I cut my hand off
without a moan.

Won't take my eyes
off the ball again.
No loss is too great,
No sacrifice denied.

I can accept this loss, too.

I can do no worse;
I can be no better.

And you shall yeild
In the end of times
To sing my praise.

I am not afraid...

---

"Through Royal Gates"


This is it, I'm finished
I've done all I can
It's not enough
Can't ever be enough
all will is gone
Totally drained, I've been
witting in a corner
Desolate, deformed, defiled

a veil has fallen
Walls of ruin

Swollen eyeballs crying black
Slow congealing
Over stiff limbs
A little girl, little girl who
doesn't understand
the quiet
doesn't know about the hate
wandering dazed
through crumbling streets

We're all corpses in heat
Melting minds into the dirt
Peeling skin flakes in
puddles of bile
Decompose my worries away...

---

"Stumburgh's View'

Moldy oldlings gather moss
in a field of tiny carrots
they wish they were young

brash youngsters jump
into a a river off a bridge
very high but not long

view my existance
as a brief flash of flame
one lick and it's gone

display of affection
rejection of idols and influences
compulsion to-

---

"Open-shut philosophy"

Open the door and you shy away
stare at me in disbelief
what was it you came to say?
heard you cry so desperately
tell me that I know the way
I have no idea what you mean

What was that? what was that?
I'm struggling, I'm struggling
You're on my side, on my side
I don't need you, don't need you

Every day you waste and waste away
And i hardly ever see you
hardly find it in my heart to care
but I feel our fates are tied
and we can't, we won't escape
from this prison of each other's presence

I know that, I know that
you're the only way, only one
to stand by me, stand with me
and day by day, day by day
I look aside, look aside
and i curse you, I curse you
and you are blind, blind to all
you do to me, do to me and
what was that? what was that?
I'm fearing you, fearing you're
not on my side, no you are
The enemy, enemy
I can not, just sit here
and take it all, endlessly
and you will not get away
from what you owe to everybody

---

"Inspired by cowardly days"

I am a worthless coward
  infected with boils and rage
I just ignore what I'm missing
  I am afraid of change
there is this set of blinders
  I've placed over my own eyes
I am unable to do what it is
  That I need to do

To be happy and be whole
And be one with myself
and one with the world
To be healthy and well
and be all that I can
and make my life work

not to feel so ashamed...

I see myself so influenced
  By violence and hate everyday
I am ignorant but not dumb
  Yet I am a stooge with no brain
There is a certain norm that is
  shoved up my ass and in my face
But I am unable to do what it is
  That I feel that I need to do
  to reform all this rage

to create

to be happy and whole
One-ness with the self
And one-ness with the world
and be all that you can
and to make your life work
and to be truly free
and smother them all
with mediocrity

always the same.
always the same.
An individual
Like everyone else.
I'm so original

---

"The Journalist Song"

Who does it hurt more
You or myself?

What could I do
To escape this hell?

Where did I go
So wrong in my ways?

Why couldn't I
Have realized the flaws?

When will I ever
Be redeemed in your eyes?

How come those eyes
Will haunt my remaining days?

---

Okay. That's enough for now.

Yes i write a lot.
Olyroo.tumblr.com

I'm in Vancouver once a month for two days. Hit me up if you want to chill yo.

JestersKing

I have a lovely little guitar riff I recite this one over. :)
The metre was a little strange, so I wrote it out as a prose poem, which was odd due to stanza format.. but.. hey, whatever.

Left Alone
far out
and beyond
the light of reason

where all we are and all we could ever be, our yin-an-yang dualities are folding in upon themselves into a single dime-sized point of silver luminescence; and all our souls gather up and swim in ocean skies like a million little fish against the tide.
how could this majestic tongue ever work on a man like you? What things can be said to express the solitude of our existences, what words can be moved to explain the dilapidation of our selves?
Why do we look for beauty in the night sky? Is it because we're too unaware that if we look down and clear away all this bullshit, this hate, this greed, this spite, this malice and war that we'll find there's actually some kind of beauty in the human soul, that there's a human voice crying up for release, crying up for sensation, crying out for an end to all our sufferings?
Well, here we are. All we are: Dancing in the streets at night-time and singing like a fool at a bus stop. Kept alive on simple things, kept existing in a world that is by far and without a doubt:

Left alone
far out
and beyond
the light of reason
Love's the only engine of survival