my short storie for those who like to read

[Icey Dominus]

umm ignore the grammar i didn't have spell check and it finished it late at night so i didn't want to do it manually

Whatever happens, don't talk
We run down the path looking for the house. The house that was on the transmission. Hector silently doubts it will even be there as he jogs at the front of the group. Hector signals everyone to stop as they reach the edge of a street, he pokes his head out and looks at the street name
"Dawsy ya this is the place." He whispers to Josh, TJ, Liz, and Jordan who is still grumbling about having to leave her favorite gun back at the old hideout.
"Damit Jordan shut up. You had no ammo anyways; it would have just slowed us all down that much more." Hector whispers with a hint of annoyance. Jordan continues to grumble and curse Hectors name. Josh, TJ, and Liz all just roll their eyes.
Liz mutters under her breath "same old same old no matter what the danger."

Hector turns to them again "okay the house is supposed to be at the end of this street, so spread out and stay in the shadows." They all cast him very knowing looks.
"Jeeze sorry wow hostility at a max huh." Hector chuckles and starts off running to the first house easily jumping over the fence not looking back to make sure the others are following. He stays in the shadows and stops to check if the coast is clear between each clearing. Finally he reaches the last house on the street; he waits at the back door under the stairs waiting them to all gather. Finally they are all together again after the run. Hector thinks back to a year and a half ago remembering how most of them would never have been able to run that without being out of breath but now they are all there and they haven't even broken a sweat.

Hector looks at Jordan the smart one despite her striking looks "mhmm so Jordan you remember where that key is supposed to be?"
She nods "ya should be under the mat. Like they couldn't think of a better place to put it." Hector goes to the back door and lifts the mat sure enough there it is. He picks it up and unlocks the door, slowly opens it peering into the dark room. Nothing dangerous he walks in signalling for the others to follow. Once they are all in Hector puts the key back under the mat and closes the door locking it.
Liz calls from the hall way "hey over here I found the hidden door." He walks into the hallway and a portion of the wall is open where you would never think to look. "Built right into the corner of the wall sweet." Says Josh.
TJ walks up behind Hector and gives him a backwards hug "nice job babe." Hector laughs and pries TJ off "okay let's get in there those dirt bags are supposed to be coming soon."
They all squeeze through the small door closing it behind them with a solid click. There is a small set of stairs then another door, thick heavy steel door with a code lock on it. A sticky note with the code written on it. Josh punches in the code and the door pops open with a hiss. Josh falls into the room with a thud.
Liz laughs as says "watch that first step it's a doosy!" as she climbs down the latter. "Ha ha" Josh says dripping with sarcasm. He gets up of the hard metal floor the lights turning on with his movement. They all jump down the latter and stand next to him in awe of the sweet set up. Bunk beds with pillows and blankets a small kitchen in the corner with water and a microwave, and best off all and huge pile of survival food packs. Completed with a bathroom that has a full sized shower. The girls and TJ race to the shower all trying to strip and get in first, Liz wins being the fastest she cackles a evil laugh as she turns on the hot water and embraces the shower.

Hours later everyone has settled in to their bed after much deliberation and loud yelling about who gets the top bunks. Ultimately Hector, Liz, and Jordan get the top bunks Josh getting the bottom. TJ was fortunate that one bunk was a double so he got to be with Hector.

They all had a meal of survival packs "mmm liquid chicken breast my fav" grumbles Jordan.
"You know you always have something to whine about Jordan why you can't just find the good things?" lectures Josh.
Hector laughs "why don't you knock it off with them negative waves!!" Everyone cracks up knowing the line from there fav movie ever (Kelly's Heroes). In the midst of the laughing feel the ground around them shake slightly, at first they think earth quake then they realize it's not constant something rolling by. Josh runs up the latter and the stairs to the hidden door looks out the front window of the house.
He returns back, white faced "they are here all of them tanks soldiers, apc's, hummers, everything. What if they find us they will take us to one of their camps or torture us for information?" Josh freaks out and goes into corner holding his almost empty pistol weeping and rocking crazily. Hector takes everyone to the other side of the room leaving Josh alone.
"Sigh I saw this coming he was never the same after seeing that camp" every one nods in agreement. Then Josh starts yelling "I AM NOT GOING TO A CAMP THEY WONT TAKE ME!!" then quieter
i am not going to wate for them to find us i am going to end this here, i only i have one shot thats all i need.  Hector turns just in time to see Josh put the gun against his temple with a smile on his face "they arent taking me never i would rather die." He says just loud enough for them to hear. Hector runs as fast as he can to stop him launches himself through the air at him but he is not fast enough. BAM Josh decorated the wall with his brains and skull . Hector smaches into his body moments to late, he stands over the twitching body that was Josh. Hector screams at his life less body "why man no why the fuck fuck no man stupid son of a bitch." Hector starts sobbing while he pics up the body by the shirt like he is penelizing him still yelling at him between sobs.
Suddenly they hear thuds coming from up stairs the soldiers where coming. "fuck they must have herd the gun shot and your dam yelling" Wispers Liz who is standing behind Hector now prying his hands from the body.  Then THUD BANG the soldiers break the hidden door.  They can hear them coming down the stairs, there is a moment of shock before any of them run for the steel door and slam it on the soldiers just as they started opening it. The soldiers start yelling for help telling others on the radio that there are people here. "shit  what are you going to do now we have no where to go and no way to defend ourselves other than with hand to hand." Says TJ holding his baseball bat. Hector goes to his bag and rummages through  it until he pulls out his pair of spiked brass knuckles. Liz and Jordan get there short swords. "so this is what we got, well at least we wont go down to easy we will be ready. The soldiers are at the door yelling and talking about something there voices muffled by the thick door. "well we best say are goodbyes now just in case we dont all make it out of this alive or get sent to different places. Hector gives Jordan and Liz hugs, Jordan sobs slightly but Liz is stone faced  as usual. Hector goes over to TJ after he is done saying his goodbyes to the girls. Hector hugs TJ tight and kisses deeply and lovingly "hope i see you at the end of this babe." TJ whispers in Hectors ear. Hector kisses his cheek and wipes his tears away "dont worry we will see each other i will make sure of it." Liz walks up behind Hector and smacks him hard on the back of the hed "dam fruits you are to fucking emotional get up and get ready they are cutting through the door and will be flash banging this room any second!" Hector through's her a look that could kill while he is still holding TJ close. He mumbles "god dam it Liz always so cold." Pulls away from TJ grudgingly but knowing she was right as the bright red line moved around the edge of the door.  The girls stand on the left side of the door while TJ and Hector take the left waiting for them to come through. "hey cover your ears and shut your eyes when they first drop the door it might help against the flash bangs a little." Says Liz to everyone.  No one says anything the only sound is the hiss of the door cutter. Finally the cutter goes quiet  and the sound of a metal canister on metal floor is herd by all. Luckily there was a little hallway after the strong door or the flash bang would have had a much worse affect.  It goes off mainly in the small hall way hardly affecting the group. Next came the soldiers rushing through the door brandishing tazers, and assault rifles. The girls rush the first two slicing them good with there sword piercing there armour with eas but are quickly tazed and tyed up on the ground then TJ starts smashing the back of one of the soldiers who was tying up Liz beating in his helmet with his bat and hiting another one before he was tazed  in the back by a couple of soldiers. At this point Hector is in a white hot rage seeing thease things thease invaders tyeing up his friends and beating them. He charges in smashing everything he can with his brass knuckles. He connects with a soldiers face feeling break to peaces then swing a upper cut to another crushing his jaw a tearing it open. They tazer him multiple times he just rips the barded hooks out and continues to smash wildly undit four of them jump on him and start beating him to near unconscious. They through  him on his stomach and start tye him up. Hector gurgles some words befor he passes out, a soldier bends down to listen "kill me you fucks."   The soldier nods and says nothing as he cocks his pistol and rests the muzzle against Hectors head about to pull the trigger when someone yells "HOLSTER THAT PISTOL  CORPORAL!! We need them alive they are the ones responsible for all are those terrorist acts we need to make an example of them before we kill them.  Dam Canadians never know when they are beat.

[Icey Dominus]

I am posting this for tweaking in any way that could make it better i would love feed back  ;D

[Maoi Neko]

Definitely needs a little polish, but neat idea.