A song that I made.

[Fennie]

ElektrikOrchestra

Just some music I made, I would love to hear some replys on what you guys think.

Keep in mind it was my first "good" song I made. I'm a newbie at this music business XD

Thanks :D

EDIT -- There's also a skip around :30 so yeah.

[Lune]

I'm feeling it.  8)

I like that you did not go too heavy on the bass, a nice clean simple bassline was a nice change
The transition at 1:25 did not feel natural.  Maybe use some sort of build up or fade in.
I liked the ending as you pulled out the electronic elements it was pretty slick

Good job, keep it up and continue to hone your craft.  :)

[Hadlock]

i really like the   classical atmosphere of the song, sounds very  Haydn-esqu, good use of counterpart in some parts
nice catchy melodies
love the little measure of the minor at 0:53


my only suggestion would to be just to spend a little more time on mastering and editing, to smooth the skips
also the electric gutiar tone, could have been better. it was a bit distracting, maybe use less distortion and a bit more reverb  and chorus to blend in better with the violin tone

other than those few little thing, i really think its a cool peice.
hope you post more :)

[Fennie]

Haha thanks. Yeah, I didn't really edit it at all...

[Fennie]

maybe use less distortion and a bit more reverb  and chorus to blend in better with the violin tone

Yeeeeeeeaaaaahhh, I went overboard on the distortion... XD I thought it sounded cool, but I guess it's not the right thing for the song haha.