The Story Of A Samurai

Samurai Kai · November 21, 2014, 04:03:08 PM

I don't really write, and this may not be the best "backstory" of a character, but, whatever.
I hope you enjoy. I can't wait to see some feedback of this character. I'm still into some "development" and looking to add more to the story to make it a little more juicier but this is just a backstory for her.

Kai Zhou is a lone snow leopard warrior who searches for a way to redeem all that was lost due to her mother's death and the destruction of their ancestral home. She blames herself for not being strong enough to stop the events that happened at the time, she was very young. Kai hopes to one day achieve a form of peace and justice for all that was taken from those who lived there and to restore a balance that was once within her family, not just her own. Despite having quite the intimidating appearance Kai is most compassionate and respectful to most, a possible trait inherited from her own mother. She is but she likes to think of herself as a monk and all that she does is for the greater good. At times, this snow leopard can be a little cocky, but that is totally understandable especially coming from a feline such as herself. She takes quite the pride out of showing others, especially her male rivals that she is quite capable of fighting and also loves going out of her way to prove that she isn't some type of damsel in distress who needs some type of knight in shining armor to come save her.

One day, Kai finally achieves what she had sought to, and becomes the savior of, her home, Hisakawa. Restoring peace and honor upon their home, achieving the rank of a true Samurai. She wasn't just any simple Samurai after that, she turned out to be so much more. She became a well known and respected warrior across the land after vanquishing the cruelty and tyranny of her own father who very much abused and misused the power that he wrongfully yet firmly held onto that also came with the creation of a corrupt army she fought against. She did not stand alone on her quest to take him down, for she had many followers and companions who stood together, and dared to take the pledge to restoring their home no matter the cost... and so they did. Her mission was finally complete, and upon such victory everyone cheered and celebrated together. Inner peace had been achieved for all, and not only among the living. Everyone believed that such an event in which that was so unique unlike any the folk had ever faced before, forced a balance

Flame · December 05, 2014, 03:29:36 AM

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I like this backstory, it is very meaningful and shows what "Kai Zhou" is trying to do and what has happened in her past. I would like to see more added to the story.

Cant wait to see a update to this :3

Samurai Kai · December 05, 2014, 05:34:40 PM

Quote from: Flame on December 05, 2014, 03:29:36 AM
:thumbs: :thumbs: :thumbs:

I like this backstory, it is very meaningful and shows what "Kai Zhou" is trying to do and what has happened in her past. I would like to see more added to the story.

Cant wait to see a update to this :3

Thank you for the commentary Flame. I appreciate it. ^^

Perhaps there will be an update, whenever more ideas form. I'm trying to make it a good story, ya know? Not dull or anything. Hopefully it spikes some interest. Of course, I'm not a prodigy to that sort of thing. X.x

Flame · December 10, 2014, 05:51:26 PM

No problem :3
I wish I could give you some feedback or ideas to maybe add to the story, but I'm the worst when it comes to writing and Story telling XD

Samurai Kai · December 19, 2014, 11:29:53 AM

Quote from: Flame on December 10, 2014, 05:51:26 PM
No problem :3
I wish I could give you some feedback or ideas to maybe add to the story, but I'm the worst when it comes to writing and Story telling XD

I am sure you are not as bad as you may think! I think anyone has the potential if they really put their minds to it. Like me and that can take some time it doesn't have to be quick.

Here is the town she came from, Hisakawa. (It means "market place by the river")

Flame · December 20, 2014, 02:17:35 AM

Quote from: Samurai Kai on December 19, 2014, 11:29:53 AM
I am sure you are not as bad as you may think! I think anyone has the potential if they really put their minds to it. Like me and that can take some time it doesn't have to be quick.

Here is the town she came from, Hisakawa. (It means "market place by the river")

I know that I could if I put my mind to it,I just don't write story's that much because it takes a lot of time and most of my time goes to either work or gaming mainly gaming x3
But I love writing story's when I do have the time to.

That is a very beautiful picture, it looks like a very peaceful place to be.