here it is again (water)

Started by Icey Dominus, September 04, 2010, 11:05:51 AM

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Icey Dominus

this is the same story as before but i had to rea write it and change things cuz i am to much of a pussy to let my dad read the original lol

Water?
We run down the path looking for the house. The house that was on the transmission. Hector silently doubts it will even be there as he jogs at the front of the group. Hector signals everyone to stop as they reach the edge of a street; he pokes his head out and looks at the street name
"Dossy ya this is the place." He whispers to Josh, Taz, Jasmine, and Jordan who is still grumbling about having to leave her favourite gun back at the old hideout.
"Damit Jordan shut up. You had no ammo anyways; it would have just slowed us all down that much more." Hector whispers with a hint of annoyance. Jordan continues to grumble and curse Hectors name. Josh, Taz, and Jasmine all just roll their eyes.
Jasmine mutters under her breath "same old same old no matter what the danger."
"Okay the house is supposed to be at the end of this street, so spread out and stay in the shadows." They all cast him very knowing looks.
"Jeeze sorry wow hostility at a max huh." Hector chuckles and starts off running to the first house easily jumping over the fence not looking back to make sure the others are following. He stays in the shadows and stops to check if the coast is clear before each clearing. Finally he reaches the last house on the street; he waits at the back door under the stairs waiting them to all gather. Finally they are all together again after the run. Hector thinks back to a year and a half ago remembering how most of them would never have been able to run that without being out of breath but now they are all there and they haven't even broken a sweat.
He looks at Jordan the smart one despite her striking looks that had brought more than one boy to his knees. She knows how to use her looks to her advantage, and she does. Also she remember everything she sees and hears, and that is good sometimes "mhmm so Jordan you remember where that key is supposed to be?"
She nods "ya should be under the mat. Like they couldn't think of a better place to put it." Hector goes to the back door and lifts the mat sure enough there it is. He picks it up and unlocks the door, slowly opens it peering into the dark room. Nothing dangerous he walks in signalling for the others to follow. Once they are all in Hector puts the key back under the mat and lock's it.
Hector calls from the hall way "hey over here I found the hidden door." The others walk into the hallway, a portion of the wall is open where you would never think to look. "Built right into the corner of the hall way sweet." Says Josh.
Jasmine walks up behind Hector and gives him a backwards hug "nice job babe." Hector laughs and pries her off "thanks, okay let's get in there those dirt bags are supposed to be coming soon."
They all squeeze through the small door closing it behind them with a solid click. There is a small set of stairs then another door, thick heavy steel door with a code lock on it. A sticky note with the code written on it. Josh punches in the code and the door pops open with a hiss. He goes to take a step into the room and falls into the room with a thud.
Jasmine laughs "watch that first step it's a doosy!" as she climbs down the latter. "Ha ha" Josh says dripping with sarcasm. "That hurt you know thanks for helping me up." He gets up of the hard metal floor the lights turning on with his movement. The others jump down the latter and stand next to him in awe of the sweet set up. Bunk beds with pillows and blankets a small kitchen in the corner with water and a microwave, and best off all and huge pile of survival food packs. Complete with a bathroom that has a full sized shower. The girls race to the shower all trying to strip and get in first, Liz wins being the fastest she cackles a evil laugh as she turns on the hot water and embraces the hot water striping in the shower and throughs her wet dirty clothes at Jordan. Hector can help but stair for a few seconds at his naked girl friend still unable to believe he was that lucky after all this time. She was the most beautiful creature to be created next to Jordan in the world not that he would tell her that. But that didn't matter Jordan didn't have her personality. No Jasmine was a mix of every girl that is perfect rolled into one. Her smooth long legs and perfectly sized hips and tits,n nipples that make a 16 year old kid jizz in his pants with just a look. Then her face a small line of freckles across her nose and cheeks and emerald green eyes. But Hector loved her personality most of all, i know its cliché but that's what really did it for him. She always wanted to do things and try new things all the time, not to mention she was stubborn and could take care of herself she was even nice to everyone but you don't want to piss her off. Hector had witnessed what happens when you cross her when her ex boyfriend cheated on her.       
Hours later everyone has settled in to their bed after much deliberation and loud yelling about who gets the top bunks. Ultimately Taz, and Jordan get the top bunks Josh getting the bottom. Jasmine was fortunate that one bunk was a double so she got to be with Hector. Hector would have fought tooth and nail for that bed anyways so they would have gotten it eventually.
They all had a meal of survival packs "mmm liquid chicken breast my fave" grumbles Jordan. "You know you always have something to whine about Jordan why you can't just find the good things?" lectures Josh. Jordan even had come from a rich family so she was used to the best of the best when it came to umm well everything. Even after months of living off bits of food here and there she still complains when she doesn't get some hundred dollar meal.
Hector laughs "why don't you knock it off with them negative waves!!" Everyone cracks up knowing the line from there fave movie ever (Kelly's Heroes). In the midst of the laughing feel the ground around them shake slightly, at first they think earth quake then they realize it's not constant something rolling by. Josh runs up the latter and the stairs to the hidden door looks out the front window of the house.
He returns back, white faced "they are here all of them tanks soldiers, apc's, hummers, everything. What if they find us they will take us to one of their camps or torture us for information?" Josh freaks out and goes into corner holding his almost empty pistol weeping and swearing. Hector takes everyone to the other side of the room leaving Josh alone.
"Sigh I saw this coming he was never the same after seeing that camp" every one nods in agreement. Then Josh starts yelling "I AM NOT GOING TO A CAMP THEY WONT TAKE ME!!" then quieter "I am not going I will die before I go with them." With that he puts the cold barrel of the pistol in his mouth. Hector turns and see's crying and staring at them about to pull the trigger. Hector lunges at Josh but he is not fast enough. The last bullet of the gun goes off in Joshes head; the back of his head decorates the wall behind him. Hector hits Josh moments after the gun goes off. He looks at the body and his hands covered in his friend's blood and brains. "FUCK MAN WHY!" he grabs Joshes lifeless body shaking it as if he was just going to wake back up, tears stream down Hectors face. Then there was a loud crash and yells.
They stop and look at the bunker door left open they could hear soldiers yelling and running around upstairs. Hector takes a breath and rubs the blood off on his shirt "get the fucking door!" Taz runs over to the door just in time to lock shut and lock it as a soldier was starting to open it. "Fuck they must have heard the shot." They all hear more yells as more soldiers show up at the door. The voices muffled by the door they don't know what they are saying but it wouldn't be hard to guess what's going on.
Hector looks at everyone stunned and scared looks on all their faces. "Okay guys there is no way out of this one I guess this is going to be our last stand for the third dam time." He chuckles nervously "so what weapons do we have?" Taz is the first to break from the trance of shock "umm we got your brass knuckles, my base ball bat, a machete, and wait I think we got some knifes." He goes to the kitchen and comes back carrying a couple large kitchen knives. Jordan walks over and takes the knives from Taz, he tests their weight and flips them around a few times, within a blink of a eye one of the knives are imbedded a cupboard. "I will take these." Hector goes for his brass knuckles in his bag one of them has a knife attached to it. He puts them on testing their weight "I will be happy with old and faithful. Taz picks up his steel baseball bat Jasmine is left with the machete not that she minds she certainly know how to use it.
The hiss of a torch fills the room and everyone looks back at the door seeing the metal go from red to white and moving around the door. "okay everyone get ready, they are military but we know they will want us alive so we don't have to worry about grenades, but they will through in flash bangs so try to plug you ears and shut your eyes just not to long of they will be in here before you can recover. Hector walks over to Jasmine and smiles at her, she returns the smile. "Aaah come on Jasmine we have been in worse spots." She looks at him then smiles "worse than being a room with only one door and not guns, and a battalion of soldiers about to rush into here, I don't think so." Jordan buts in "WELLLLLL if we had let me bring my gun then might stand a chance Hector."  Then a slam comes from the door as they try to break it open and give up and go back to cutting. Hector pulls Jasmine into a kiss warping his huge arms around her, he puts all his love and passion he can into the possibly last kiss he will ever get from her. She returns the kiss with equal passion and love if not more. They stand there in each other's embrace until Taz walks over rolling his eyes and a scowl on his face. He smacks Hector hard on the back of the head "come on you two lets go they are breaking down the door!"
They rush to either side of the door Taz and Hector on one side the girls on the other. Hector stands ready to smash the first thing through the door with his brass knuckles. The door finally falls with a loud clang, moments later they see a round canister roll into the room and then blinding flash and loud bang. The first soldier comes through the door, Hector throughs a right hook into the head; he feels the neck of the soldier break as he connects with the back of his neck missing the head but getting the desired effect. The next one comes in Jordan gets this one with a kitchen knife to the chest cutting through the Kevlar into his heart he collapses on top of the first. Then more rush in faster, Jasmine slashes at them madly, she imbeds the machete in one of their helmets and can't get out fast enough. Taz basically shows them why his name is Taz; none of the soldiers dared go within the range of the baseball bat. The swings it with precision taking out knees or breaking skulls, this goes on a while before someone smart guy decides to taze him. He swings a couple more times before he falls to the ground twitching; they jump on him and tie him up worried he might get away. Hector had gone into a white hot rage the moment he saw that soldier hit Jasmine. He charged into that unfortunate soldier and dug the knife end of his knuckles into his back and pushes down ripping it out, chunks of ribs, muscle, and organs are ripped out. He smashes the helmet of the solider until it's broken into pieces and his skull is obliterated. Now he his sights on the group that had tied up the others. The charges into them all 350 pounds hitting one of them sending him flying, he hits the wall and doesn't get back up his head hanging at an unusual angle. Hector starts swinging wildly hitting anything in from of him. He starts sending bone breaking punches into backs, heads, ribs anything that got in the way was smashed to unrecognizable bits. He finished off at least four their bodies lay around him, he turns to the door and sees 6 more standing there tazers ready. He charges four out of six hit him square in the chest, his momentum keeps him going, the soldiers with the tazers don't take their fingers off the triggers until he is on the ground in front of them twitching. Hector try's to speak blood filling his mouth all he can get out is "kill me you fucks kill me." A soldier kneels down and hears what Hector said. The soldier nods not that he wasn't already thinking of it after the guy single handily killed 6 or so of his friends. The Soldier pulls out is pistol and pressed the muzzle against the back of his head, he disengaged the safety and pulls starts to pull the trigger. Just then someone else steps into the room of carnage. "HOLSTER THAT PISTOL CORPRAL! We need him and his marry band of terrorists alive. Dam Canadians they never give up do they.   
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