My first real attempt at manga drawing

[Fuzzy Penburg]

i have a drawing on my file thats my first real attempt at manga drawing ^^ i'm proud of it and hopefully it'll be good

[Fuzzy Penburg]

also if u could hive your opinion on it here, that'd be appreciated ^^ tyvm

[Soda]

Not bad, but you need to draw lighter lines to figure out if everything is in place.  That way if you don't like something it doesn't leave lines behind after erased.