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Creators Board => Writers => : WriterAxis February 11, 2015, 12:15:55 -07:00

: Grey Knights
: WriterAxis February 11, 2015, 12:15:55 -07:00
Seeing as I've named myself WriterAxis here, I should at least see what people think about the 'Writer' part, so here's a bit of a story I've been working on for a while. I'll be posting new chapters here as they're written. Comments and critique is much appreciated!

EDIT: Seems like it won't let me post the entire chapter here, so I've linked the document below. Does anyone know why it won't let me?
https://docs.google.com/document/d/1KXq03zLEj7shfflHFB-PiEWdxUcwtrIfX70ro3qYzgc/edit?usp=sharing
: Re: Grey Knights
: lindel February 12, 2015, 11:56:22 -07:00
The story kept my interest and I find myself wanting to know where you'll be taking it.I noticed a few grammatical errors but nothing a quick re-read won't catch