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Creators Board => Artists => : Jimfoxyboy August 16, 2010, 02:51:13 -06:00

: Red line help
: Jimfoxyboy August 16, 2010, 02:51:13 -06:00
So, I'm trying my hand, (or paw,) at drawing the characters in a story that I have in mind to do.

I have a few tutorial drawings on hand but there was quite a number of gaps that I had to fill in on my own or just couldn't get right. (lots of erasing). The hands, arms, a little about the face and waist. Also, this isn't the best shot of the picture, taken with my camera as I didn't nave a scanner available at the time. I'll get it scanned in properly, later on hopefully.

I was wondering if someone could red line 'fix' some of the really bad spots, a little for me. (I'm trying to learn..)

(http://i68.photobucket.com/albums/i34/Jimfoxyboy/Ricci.jpg)
: Re: Red line help
: Dinsu September 21, 2010, 11:24:22 -06:00
(http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v51/undiaoth/redline.jpg)

Here you go! I hope this is good enough. (:
I tried to emulate your style as best I could... You might want to think about lengthening the legs of your characters but I understand that might just be a stylistic thing. I just tried to add anatomy to your style.
I also tried to show you how to add fluff you your faces and cheekbones to give them definition. These are only guidelines and don't need to be so exaggerated.. I also wasn't sure if you wanted help with drawing heads.

You seem to have a good grip on the basics! Just keep drawing and you'll get there in no time! (:

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http://stop-tracing.deviantart.com/favourites/?6281081#/d1qfmps (http://stop-tracing.deviantart.com/favourites/?6281081#/d1qfmps)
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: Re: Red line help
: Jimfoxyboy September 22, 2010, 12:14:28 -06:00
Ah, thanks. It gives me something of a better idea now. I wasn't sure how the arms would sit on the sides of the body with all that fur. I suppose I could lengthen the thighs slightly and make the torso shorter. Otherwise I was just going to keep the looks of the legs and paws. I have a few more characters that I want to do still and I'll probably go back over this one a few more times before I'll settle on a style I'm happy with. This was just to see what I could come up with for the first time. ^^;