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« on: June 16, 2010, 05:52:48 pm »

Couple of poems that have been written at various points in the last year...

Introduction:
Here I sit
Writing blindly
Mesmerized by the words
That flow free from my fingers
What am I?
Who am I?
I am a pacifist fighter
I am a hate-filled lover
I am an illiterate writer
I am an average non-conformist
I am a noble everyman
I am a consenting revolutionary
I am a softhearted bastard
I am a fucking saint
I am a pious demon
I am blind painter
I am a mute singer
I am a false truth
I am a living contradiction
Wrapped in self-loathing and self-gratification
I am the one
Who needs no introduction.


Misfortune:
You call me a black cat
Cause I'm just bad luck
You say I'm a curse
But I don't give a fuck

You blame your misfortune
On everything that I do

I've made mistakes
That much I know
But you run to me
You've nowhere else to go

You scream that you hate me
But love everything we've been through

We've been through so much
And I wouldn't change a thing
We've weathered the winter
And we wait for the spring
If our love is a battle
I'll fight til the end
I'll be the one
On which you can depend
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« Reply #1 on: July 16, 2010, 11:47:28 pm »

Thank you for sharing! I enjoyed both of these, but my favorite part is probably the first verse of Misfortune. Excellent rhythm.
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« Reply #2 on: July 23, 2010, 05:12:25 pm »

The poetic contradiction of "Introduction" was amusing and inspired. "Black Cat" was also quite thought provoking, nice rhythm and verse.
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